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Typographical & other errors - LMCCo, Herb Magic, AIRR, MISC

Posted: Sat May 30, 2009 3:57 pm
by Editrix
Dear cat,
As promised, I've started proofing the AIRR site. It's been a little slow going, as nursemaid duties are still in the forefront, but I'll post chunks as I get them done section by section.

General:
There's a disagreement in counseling vs. counselling. It is spelled with two ls in the caption for "Spiritual Consultation and Rootwork Advice" and one l in the blurb titled "AIRR Readers & Rootworkers who Perform This Work for Clients."

Astrology Page:
1. Capitalization is inconsistent. "Modern Astrology" is capitalized in its first appearance, but thereafter it is lowercase. The same is true for "Character Analysis" and "Horary Astrology," but the others are lowercase from their first apperances onward, except for "Vedic Astrology." In its first appearance, "astrology" is lowercase, but it becomes uppercase later in the description. In that same section, there is also the lone occurrence of "Astrology" by itself capitalized.
2. Under "Modern Astrology and the Natal Horoscope," "forecasts" is typed as "forcasts."
3. Under "Chinese Astrology," a comma is missing between "characteristics" and "and destiny." (OK, this one's debatable, as the terminal comma is a controversial troublemaker, but as it's used elsewhere, it should come in here for consistency.)

Bibliomancy Page:
1. Under "Divination by the Book," "Holy Bible" is mistyped as "Goly Bible."
2. Under "Bibliomantic Cleidomancy," "Bibliomantic Cleidomancy" in the text is bolded, which is inconsistent.
3. Under "Bibliomancy with the I Ching," "conformity" might be capitalized for consistency. Also, the final occurrence of "I Ching" has an accidental bracket after it.
4. Nitpicky, I know, but I recommend splitting the sentence that begins "When printed leaf-bound books ..." into two sentences, the first ending with "family possessions" and the second beginning "Their efficacy ..."

Card Reading Page:
1. In top paragraphs, "for to tell" should be "to tell."
2. The paragraph beginning "Gifted card readers" needs a period at the end.
3. Under "Divination Styles," "querent" and "significator" should be in double quotes for consistency; comma after "significator" should go inside closing quotation marks; "other forces" is mistyped as "others forces."
4. Under "Playing Cards," "regulation" is mistyped "regulartion." "The Two of Hearts" is mistyped as "he Two of Hearts."
5. Under "Tarot Cards," the commas following "Book of Thoth" and "Papus" should go inside the closing quotes. The comma and space between "In addition" and "many how-to-read Tarot ..." are transposed. "Spell-casting" is typed as "spell-crasting." In the final bullet point, "created" is typed "cxreated," "images" is typed "imags."

Thanks for letting me participate. More to come!
Stephanie

Re: AIRR-ors (attn: cat)

Posted: Wed Jun 03, 2009 7:20 pm
by catherineyronwode
Thank you so much. The site is a wiki, so it suffers from "diverse hands syndrome." I will attend to the items you found at once. The site goes live June 6th, but i will be working on it for a while after that, of course.

Re: AIRR-ors (attn: cat)

Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2009 3:18 pm
by Editrix
No problem. Here are a few more.

Cast, Marked, and Randomly Generated Reading Page:
1. In the second introductory paragraph, "Botanical" should be lowercase for consistency with "zoological."
2. Under "Rune Divination," "one or more" is typed as "one of more."
3. Under Obi Divination, "is a variety of" is typed as "is variety of."
4. The Obi Divination paragraph is repeated at the beginning of the following section ("Four Cowrie Shell Readings").
5. Under "Four Cowrie Shell Readings," I suggest adding a comma after "In traditional Ifa"; I would spell out "two types of energy" instead of "2 types ..."; I'd also remove the comma between "cowrie shell" and "as a source of divination." For consistency, "Stomach" in "Stomach up" should be lowercase; the space between "mouth up" and "(light)" is missing; I'd include a comma after "Going further." "Greater more in depth reading" would be clearer as "Greater, more in-depth reading." Rather than "It represents all light ..." you might consider "It indicates that all light ..." A comma is missing between "with experience" and "and as such" and also between "however" and "is used in all." I'd change "3 dimensional" to "three-dimensional" and spell out "four quadrants."
6. Under "Four Pieces of Coconut Readings," I suggest spelling out "five major outcomes" but using numerals for numbers of white/dark sides for consistency.
7. Under "Diloggun," "the" before "La Regla de Ocha" is redundant. I suggest numerals for numbers of "mouths up" from 10 up, numeral for "17th possibility," and "eight possible objects" spelled out; "clients own ori" should be "client's ..." possessive.
8. Under "Bibliomancy" and "I Ching," "Bibliomancy," "I Ching," and "Book of Changes" are bolded, which is inconsistent with the formatting of the rest of the page.

Cup Reading Page:
1. Under "History of Tea Leaf Reading," "drinking cups" is followed by a slash rather than a period; a comma is missing between "Scotland" and "Ireland"; "fortune telling waitresses" takes a hyphen ("fortune-telling ..." as compound modifier).
2. Under "Special Cups," "fortune telling cups" also takes a hyphen.
3. Under "Astrological Cups ...," "Symbol Cups ...," and "Cartomancy Cups ...," "symbols lay" is typed for "symbols lie."
4. Under "Cartomancy Cups," "52 card" takes a hyphen.
5 Under "Coffee Ground Reading," "finely-ground" doesn't need a hyphen; I suggest "composed of" instead of "comprised of."

I'll keep working on it. More soon!
Stephanie

Re: AIRR-ors (attn: cat)

Posted: Sat Jun 06, 2009 9:06 am
by Dee_2
Love the AIRR site guys! It is so nice to have a directory. :)

Dee

Re: AIRR-ors (attn: cat)

Posted: Tue Jun 09, 2009 9:52 am
by Amanda
Here's one I found - under I Ching in the section of I Ching Divination with Coins, there's a line that says "Two tails and 1 dead = 3 + 2 + 2 or 7" which I'm assuming meant "Two tails and 1 head."

Re: AIRR-ors (attn: cat)

Posted: Tue Jun 09, 2009 5:56 pm
by Editrix
You beat me to it, Amanda. That's the very section I was working on. Nice catch! :D

Typographical & other errors on Lucky Mojo site catalog

Posted: Mon Jul 13, 2009 10:37 pm
by silverpony
I was going over the LM online catalog pages tonight as I'm putting together another fairly hefty order, and I noticed a few errors/problems.

Problem #1: "Change Good Luck To Bad" text for Van Van

This text occurs for both the regular Van Van mojo hand and the triple strength mojo hand. I haven't checked to see if the rest of the Van Van supplies offered on the site on the various pages also have this text.
"Open the way, clear away evil, change good luck to bad" http://www.luckymojo.com/mojocatmojo.html

Problem #2: $4 for a Mixed Dozen Bath Crystals
Note: When this item is selected and put in one's shopping cart, the correct price of $44 appears - but there may be some selfish customers out there who insist that since it's listed at a price of $4 for a dozen that they should recieve that price.

-- Any 12 Hoodoo Bath Crystals Mixed Dozen $4.00
BCR-HOO-ZDOZ
http://www.luckymojo.com/mojocatbaths.html

Problem #3: Prices don't match on some of the spell kits, ie Money Drawing and Money Stay with Me - looks like the prices were raised on the far right column with the Add to Cart button, but weren't adjusted in the description columns to their immediate left. Some kits have consistent prices, others show price differences from $1 to $5.

Re: Typographical & other errors on Lucky Mojo site catalog

Posted: Tue Jul 14, 2009 3:07 pm
by Chagrinedgirl
I'm sure everyone is grateful you pointed all this out.

Re: Typographical & other errors on Lucky Mojo site catalog

Posted: Thu Jul 30, 2009 9:05 pm
by catherineyronwode
Thanks -- i have fixed them all. Problems like this are the result of "many hands syndrome" -- that is, one person (me) laying out the page and then someone else updating it without noticing my coding system. I appreciate your help.

Re: Typographical & other errors on Lucky Mojo site catalog

Posted: Wed May 26, 2010 8:42 am
by Joseph Magnuson
I would like to add to this (I don't want to start an another thread dealing with the same topic) and say that the link for:

How to Read Divination Signs from Candle-Burning

on the main HOODOO IN THEORY AND PRACTICE page Section C

gives you:

404 - Document Not Found

The URL you requested
was not found on this server
because the link you followed is outdated
or there was a spelling error.

Please fix the link! Thank you...

-Joseph

Re: Typographical & other errors on Lucky Mojo site catalog

Posted: Wed May 26, 2010 8:56 am
by Joseph Magnuson
Also this, on the main, main page www.luckymojo.com/

AIRR: ASSOCIATION OF INDEPNDENT
READERS AND ROOTWORKERS:

...I just caught that! :)

-Joseph

Re: Typographical & other errors on Lucky Mojo site catalog

Posted: Sat May 29, 2010 3:14 pm
by Joseph Magnuson
Florida Water Soap, Purifying, Florida Water scent
Hard-milled pale-green soap scented with famous Florida Water, in the same wrapper as the Cologne; for spiritual cleansing and purification. 3.3 oz. bar, in vintage-style Art Nouveau wrapper.

This link in the Magical Soaps section is a 404 as well...

-J

Re: Typographical & other errors on Lucky Mojo site catalog

Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 8:39 am
by Joseph Magnuson
On the I Can You Can't product page ( http://www.luckymojo.com/bath-i-can-you-cant.html )

this link ( All About I Can You Can't Spiritual Supplies, With Free Magic Spells and Prayers )

is not working and leading to the 404 message.

Thanks...!

-joseph

Re: Typographical & other errors on Lucky Mojo site catalog

Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 10:11 am
by Turnsteel
Ritual Sound

Oh, I can help with this one. Not all of the products have a page about them the way say, Fiery Wall of Protection or Fast Luck do. Miss Cat will probably get to them at some point I'm sure.

Re: Typographical & other errors on Lucky Mojo site catalog

Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 10:37 pm
by Joseph Magnuson
Ah, I see! I thought that if there was no additional info it usually took you to a generic order page with the four possible items to order...not the crazy 404 error message I got...

Oh well... Thanks for the information!!!

-Joseph

Re: Typographical & other errors on Lucky Mojo site catalog

Posted: Sun Jun 06, 2010 11:34 am
by Joseph Magnuson
Oh rats!

I hate to be the Supreme Chancellor of Bother, (at least in this thread) but this link at Southern-Spirits is kicking to the 404 Error screen:

WILLIAM WELLS BROWN:
Uncle Frank, a Fortune Teller Slave in Missouri
from "Narrative of William W. Brown, An American Slave" (1847).


I would really like to read that. The link is from the main page of Southern-Spirits. Thank you! Love!

-Joseph

Re: Typographical & other errors on Lucky Mojo site catalog

Posted: Wed Jun 09, 2010 9:07 am
by Joseph Magnuson
Also the link for Zora Neale Hurston on the http://www.luckymojo.com/hoodoo.html page leads to a 404 Error message:

404 - Document Not Found

The URL you requested
was not found on this server
because the link you followed is outdated
or there was a spelling error.

Lucky Mojo Black Salt Correction

Posted: Wed Oct 06, 2010 3:31 pm
by Apo
Hello Miss Cat

I been reading the descriptions of the different products Lucky Mojo offers and I noticed a small mistake in the Black Salt page. Black salt in spanish is called "Sal Negra" because Salt is considered feminine -la sal- , so we refer to it as "Negra" intead of "Negro" which corresponds to masculine things. It's a common mistake due to the language differences, just thought it would be nice to mend it for orthographic and learning sakes. :D

Apo

Re: Lucky Mojo Black Salt Correction

Posted: Thu Oct 07, 2010 12:35 am
by starsinthesky7
hmm never knew that.

Re: Lucky Mojo Black Salt Correction

Posted: Wed Mar 09, 2011 10:07 am
by Apo
It seems my small post got overlooked.

Re: Lucky Mojo Black Salt Correction

Posted: Wed Mar 09, 2011 10:24 am
by jwmcclin
Thanks Apo

Re: Typographical & other errors on LMCCo, H-M, AIRR, and MISC

Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2015 7:13 pm
by Michelle12
Hi
I am most probably posting on the wrong place but I have tried to scour the site for your complaints system and I cannot seem to find it can you point me in the right direction please

Re: Typographical & other errors on LMCCo, H-M, AIRR, and MISC

Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2015 9:26 pm
by Miss Aida
Hello, Michelle12,

Please PM me and I'll see if I can help

Thanks

Re: Typographical & other errors on LMCCo, H-M, AIRR, and MISC

Posted: Tue Feb 23, 2016 7:24 pm
by freda222
hello,

I just noticed while placing a candle order a small error. The main page of the MISC where it lists all the candles available under the candle light service has the correct price of 20.00 listed for each candle but when you click on a specific candle to see more info on it, it takes you to a diff page with the old price set to 18.00. Once the customer clicks on "add to cart" for any candle the system does correct the price back to 20.00.

Re: Typographical & other errors on LMCCo, H-M, AIRR, and MISC

Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2016 2:51 pm
by Miss Aida
Hello, freda222,

Thanks. I will tell Miss cat and Nagasiva

Thank you

Re: Typographical & other errors - LMCCo, Herb Magic, AIRR, MISC

Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2016 6:20 pm
by loyal_stranger
I'm not sure if this is the right place for this or not - but I was shopping for Road Opener supplies and happened to notice that the "Rose of Crucifixion" oil right below it has the same "Road Opener" description. Not sure if that was a typo or intentional (as I'm not that familiar with Rose of Crucifixion as it were) but thought I'd mention it just in case.

Re: Typographical & other errors - LMCCo, Herb Magic, AIRR, MISC

Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2016 7:41 pm
by catherineyronwode
Thanks! You have helped us out, and i certainly do appreciate it.

We carry 5,000 products in our online and walk-in inventories, and mistakes do happen -- and sometimes go unnoticed for DECADES!

I will fix this ASAP.

Re: Typographical & other errors - LMCCo, Herb Magic, AIRR, MISC

Posted: Sun Jun 25, 2017 12:05 pm
by LDB1957
Hello Everyone

Just noticed while browsing Lucky Mojo.
The SKU for

GINSENG ROOT (WONDER OF THE WORLD) POWDER and
GINSENG ROOT (WONDER OF THE WORLD)

are reversed on the web page http://www.herb-magic.com/#Herbs-C

They are correct when added to the shopping cart.

Could cause an order problem for those who don't use the shopping cart.

LDB1957
Student Number 0243

Re: Typographical & other errors - LMCCo, Herb Magic, AIRR, MISC

Posted: Mon Jun 26, 2017 5:49 pm
by catherineyronwode
Thank you! I will relay this message to nagasiva.

Re: Typographical & other errors - LMCCo, Herb Magic, AIRR, MISC

Posted: Fri Aug 04, 2017 3:09 pm
by amithyzt
I noticed three minor typos when reading through the categories at readersandrootworkers.org. I highlighted the text and took screenshots. Is there someone specific I should direct those to? I wish I'd done the same as I was reading Hoodoo Theory and Practice, but I'm sure to read it again and I'll be more vigilant next time. I'll try to describe the locations, but if you'd prefer screenshots, let me know!

1. http://readersandrootworkers.org/wiki/C ... dle_Spells. Fixed Candle Spells, four sentences from the bottom of the first paragraph, "fat" should be "fact"

2. http://readersandrootworkers.org/wiki/C ... :Mojo_Bags. Within the description of the third image on right, should read "winnings" as opposed to "winings" ... I did chuckle a little. :)

3. http://readersandrootworkers.org/wiki/C ... :Talismans. In the area titled "protective charms against the evil eye"- second paragraph, last sentence reads "ornamented with a blues bead" ... And I chuckled again, sorry!

The summaries were great, very informative and well written. I chalk the majority up to intuitive auto correct. ;)

Re: Typographical & other errors - LMCCo, Herb Magic, AIRR, MISC

Posted: Fri Aug 04, 2017 3:48 pm
by amithyzt
I tried to edit, but may have accidentally deleted my previous post. Oooops. I found another...

http://readersandrootworkers.org/wiki/Archangel_Uriel. Last sentence refers to "Gabriel" rather than Uriel.

Re: Typographical & other errors - LMCCo, Herb Magic, AIRR, MISC

Posted: Fri Aug 04, 2017 8:10 pm
by Miss Aida
Thanks, amithyzt,

I have sent this over to cat and siva

Thanks again, EAGLE EYE!!

take care

Re: Typographical & other errors - LMCCo, Herb Magic, AIRR, MISC

Posted: Fri Aug 04, 2017 9:45 pm
by catherineyronwode
Amithyst, thank you very much for your eagle eyes! I have made all four changes at the AIRR site that yiu caught.

Re: Typographical & other errors - LMCCo, Herb Magic, AIRR, MISC

Posted: Sun Aug 06, 2017 8:20 am
by amithyzt
Eagle eyes? I like it! Lol! :lol:

I won't trouble y'all with a post every time I see something, but I wil come back around once I've collected enough to make it worth another post. Y'all brought the promptness! Thanks!

Re: Typographical & other errors - LMCCo, Herb Magic, AIRR, MISC

Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2018 10:41 am
by RevJames
Glad I found this topic - seen a few typos on the site but never knew this topic existed!

Found this one recently, as I find others now I know where to post!

http://www.luckymojo.com/spells/real.html#7 - Paragraph 2 - "lack of dunds" I believe is supposed to be "lack of funds" ^_^.

[EDIT]

Also the last paragraph of the I'm a Newbie section has this triple L - " as welll as having"

Re: Typographical & other errors - LMCCo, Herb Magic, AIRR, MISC

Posted: Thu May 10, 2018 10:40 am
by RevJames
Didn't really 'find' this today, but more so realized the solution.

On the LMCCo catalog on any page with the scrolling left banner, on larger than normal screens produces two, one on the left and one on the right (which obscures prices a bit). I use two monitors (one medium flat screen tv size and one medium avg size monitor) I realized however that it didn't do this on the forum.

Image

Thats when I noticed that the background on most other pages with the left scrolling banner, on the forum for instance, has a repeat-y where the catalog does not which is causing it to repeat in both directions rather than just vertically.

I realize this might not be an issue for most people though. Just a heads up!

Re: Typographical & other errors - LMCCo, Herb Magic, AIRR, MISC

Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2018 8:23 am
by RevJames
The link to "Read About" 13 Herb Spiritual Bath 1-Day Supply is wrong on this page - http://www.luckymojo.com/mojocatbaths.html#herbbaths
It links to Jinx Killer - http://www.luckymojo.com/jinxkiller.html
It should be - http://www.herbmagic.com/13-herb-spirit ... 1-day.html

The same problem is on "Read About" Seven Herb Spiritual Bath 1-Day Supply - http://www.luckymojo.com/mojocatbaths.html#herbbaths
It links to Good Luck - http://www.luckymojo.com/goodluck.html
It should be - http://www.herbmagic.com/7-herb-spiritu ... 1-day.html

Re: Typographical & other errors - LMCCo, Herb Magic, AIRR, MISC

Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2018 10:39 am
by catherineyronwode
Thank you! I will point this post out to siva and Ernie!